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James A. Buck's avatar

Excellent article. I dislike it when characters in pre-modern settings use late 20th Century or 21st Century slang. I once started reading a fantasy short story in a Medieval setting where a guardsman said “Cool it!”, a phrase I associate with the 1960s Counter Culture. Totally knocked me out of immersion and I put the story down.

One red flag for me is “Daddy Issues”. I always look at how a writer treats fathers and other male authority figures. Whenever you see Daddy Issues, you can assume the writer has loaded lots of other emotional baggage into the story as well.

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Great video! Also see an absolute banger of a video about this same thing:

https://youtu.be/8ynCVmw5AWk?si=B6xP05h6hPHiOmEj

This was the one where I fully realized that Hollywood was well and truly in a death spiral.

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